​5 Simple Tips To Improve Your Design
​of your About Page 


​June 16th 2018
Denis Ethier

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ORIGINAL WALL OF TEXT


ABOUT ME

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant. In the end, the words are what matters, right? Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences. ​

That's a good general guideline for academic writing. ​What difference does that make? How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant? I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point​.  Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.

Here's an example​ from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:

Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care. A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​15 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that the fast moving.

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​​Limit the amount of words per line and per paragraphs


​​​ABOUT ME

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant. In the end, the words are what matters, right?

Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences.

That's a good general guideline for academic writing. ​

What difference does that make?

How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant?

I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point​.  


Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.

​Here's an example its from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:

Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.

Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.

I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care.

A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​1​5 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that​ fast moving.

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​​​Add Text Variety


​​IMPROVING UPON THE WALL OF TEXT

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant.

​In the end, the words are what matters, right? Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences.

That's a good general guideline for academic writing

  • ​​What difference does that make?
  • How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant?

​I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point​.  

Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.

​Here's an example its from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:

Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.

Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.

I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care.

A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​1​5 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that​ fast moving.

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​Add Images


​​IMPROVING UPON THE WALL OF TEXT

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant.

In the end, the words are what matters, right? Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences.

That's a good general guideline for academic writing.

What difference does that make?

How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant?

I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point.

Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.

  • What difference does that make?
  • How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant?

I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point.

Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.


​Here's an example its from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:

Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.

Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.

I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care.

A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​1​5 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that​ fast moving.

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​Add ​a Hero Section


​HELPING

​​with  walls

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant.

In the end, the words are what matters, right? Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences.

That's a good general guideline for academic writing. ​What difference does that make? How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant? I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point​.  Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.


​Here's an example its from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:

Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.

Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.

I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care.

A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​1​5 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that​ fast moving.

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​Add ​​​more design elements


​​​Helping
Businesses ​

​with ​walls

There is a lot to consider when you're writing and the exact place you make mistakes may seem fairly insignificant.

In the end, the words are what matters, right? Well mostly. However the way paragraphs are used by you provides your work meaning and impact. In school, you may have learnt that every paragraph has to clarify one idea or point, which a paragraph should include several sentences.

That's a good general guideline for academic writing. ​What difference does that make? How does it feel to that you to have a look at both paragraph variant set of the four paragraph variant? I find my eyes getting somewhat lost in the packed paragraphs of the second edition, and its more difficult to see the key point​.  Short Paragraphs for Dramatic Impact - In both fiction and in non-fiction, short paragraphs might be used for considerable effect.



​Minka, 27 years Old from ​Zarnkinani​ ​​making words into art.

Here's an example its from a piece of non-fiction, but if that you didn't know the context, it could equally well be fiction:


Halfway through class, after educating numerous holds and releases, we ​discovered ​the ​weakness in our partner.

Finally, our instructor, a blackbelt who competed in the Olympic games, invites me to ground fight. I was no longer reluctant, I cannot hurt him.

I wriggle out of holds, attack, writhe, wrestle. I sweat. Grunt. I'm not pretty. And I do not care.

A couple of the paragraphs here are just ​1​5 words long. They are punchy and strong, plus they give us a feeling of that​ fast moving.

Need help with your design?

  • June 15, 2018

Denis Ethier

Thrive Themes Designer, Integrator and Consultant.

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